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The sunset alone was beautiful but I was sitting at a funny angle, looking out of the window and I noticed the strong silhouette of another 'model' on my window ledge, against the sunset. I played around with a few other models, but I thought this was the best.

The model choice was slightly inspired by a film I recently watched called 'Gone with the Wind'. Which I know is a total classic, but I only watched it recently. I tried to recreate the same sort of atmosphere as that film with this photo.

Hope you liked it.

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:iconspamuel:
This is very very cool. I'd consider shopping out the two orange dots. :)

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The Moving Finger writes, and, having writ,
Moves on; nor all your Piety nor Wit
Shall lure it back to cancel half a Line,
Nor all your Tears blot out a Word of it.
:iconaquillyne:
nice work dan. clearly have the EYE!

looks like you could benefit from a higher res/quality camera - its quite noisy.

i feel the subject is too close. i want more surrounding it.

do avoid manually framing your photos! look at the biggest faves on all of dA - do they have manual framing? if the photo is good, it doesnt need it.

good use of the rule of thirds in this pic. but yeh - a little cramped.
:iconbreakmonker:
you know what;

i tottaly agree with you. i thought exactly this before i uplaoded.

grain, inevitable for low light, and low lense size (which my camera is)

too close, definetly, but out of the couple of photos i took of this subject, this one came out the best so i kinda had to choose this one. the others i toko were further away.

i chose to add a frame because it was cramped. i was trying to avoid the feeling that it was that way!

dan

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it better be worthy
:iconbreakmonker:
i thought exactly this also! both u and virg think exactly like me! its weird. i thought i wud check ur responses on what u guys thought about it before i made any edits. at the moment tho, the image has only got increased contrast, aside from that, there is no photoshopping going on, which i kind of wanna keep tha way. but thanks for the comment tho, cos i was thinking the same thing.

dan

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it better be worthy
:iconaquillyne:
but adding the frame increases the crampedness!! anyway... nice photography

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SAMSUNG TECHWIN
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May 20, 2006, 1:29:41 AM

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